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Scripts ads to be aired starting during the conventions. See background discussion here.
Update, Thursday August 21: see the ads and the launch plan here.
Thanks once again to SaysMe.tv for all their help on this!
We're currently looking at two options, down from four ... both with the same visuals
Visual: long slow closeup of the Constitution on old parchment
cut to tombstone from the previous ad
final tag getFISAright.net
* 1-7 For 200 years, the Fourth Amendment protected us from unreasonable searches and seizures.
* 8-15 On July 9, all the Republican Senators voted to allow the government to listen to your phone calls and read your email without a warrant.
* 16-20 We're building a new movement that puts our Constitution above politics.
* 21-25 Don't let American freedom die. Join us at getfisaright.net
* 1-5 For 200 years, the Bill of Rights has protected our freedoms.
* 6-15 During the past 8 years, the Bush administration listened to Americans' phone calls and read their emails without a warrant.
* 16-20 If elected President , John McCain would do the same.
* 21-25 Don't let our Constitution die. Join us at getfisaright.net
Update, Thursday August 21: see the ads and the launch plan here.
Thanks once again to SaysMe.tv for all their help on this!
We're currently looking at two options, down from four ... both with the same visuals
Visual: long slow closeup of the Constitution on old parchment
cut to tombstone from the previous ad
final tag getFISAright.net
Voiceover, option 2
* 1-7 For 200 years, the Fourth Amendment protected us from unreasonable searches and seizures.
* 8-15 On July 9, all the Republican Senators voted to allow the government to listen to your phone calls and read your email without a warrant.
* 16-20 We're building a new movement that puts our Constitution above politics.
* 21-25 Don't let American freedom die. Join us at getfisaright.net
Voiceover, option 4
* 1-5 For 200 years, the Bill of Rights has protected our freedoms.
* 6-15 During the past 8 years, the Bush administration listened to Americans' phone calls and read their emails without a warrant.
* 16-20 If elected President , John McCain would do the same.
* 21-25 Don't let our Constitution die. Join us at getfisaright.net
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| bubfranks | I like the previous 'anonymous' revision with the following changes | 2 | Dec 13 2008, 11:42 AM EST by Anonymous | ||
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Thread started: Aug 19 2008, 12:49 PM EDT
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I'm liking where this is going too. This issue is not going to make or break the election, so we could be looking beyond it towards raising awareness and building our coalition.
1-5 For 200 years, the Bill of Rights guaranteed our freedoms. 6-15 Since 9/11 the Bush administration and Congress used fear mongering to erode these freedoms in the name of Security 16-20 We're rebuilding a movement around the true meaning of patriotism 21-25 Security without liberty is neither. Join us a getfisright.net |
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| craignazor | I like option 4, but... (page: 1 2) | 27 | Aug 21 2008, 9:33 AM EDT by fploof | ||
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Thread started: Aug 18 2008, 11:32 PM EDT
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How about this edit:
* 1-5 For 200 years, the Bill of Rights has protected our freedoms. * 6-15 During the past 8 years, the Bush administration has illegally monitored to our phone calls, added over a million names to terrorist lists, and has not held those who broke the law accountable. * 16-20 If elected President , John McCain has said he would do the same. * 21-25 Don't let our Constitution die. Join us at getfisaright.net |
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| craignazor | Option 4 | 0 | Aug 19 2008, 6:09 PM EDT by craignazor | ||
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Thread started: Aug 19 2008, 6:09 PM EDT
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I still vote for the "new' option 4. There's already blood in the water and the sharks are circling.
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