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| lemondrift | Great job--how about these changes? | 5 | Oct 30 2008, 7:23 PM EDT by Anonymous | ||
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Thread started: Sep 17 2008, 4:02 PM EDT
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In general, I'd cut the contractions. Also...
par1: If this election fails to address more than lipstick, pigs, and Blackberries, it will truly be a bridge to nowhere. It is past time, as we commemorate Constitution Day today, September 17th, to talk about that founding document and how the two candidates propose to undo the damage it has suffered since September 11th, 2001. in par2: The media and campaign consultants are contriving to make this a small election about small things. We believe the American people are hungry for more substantial fare, and are ready to discuss the most important issue of all:.... in par4: ..... So far, it has not been enough to reverse the anti-Constitutional tide. in par5: ..... We have not come this far to let our freedoms perish from the earth just because defending them does not fit neatly into a news culture obsessed with polls, demographics, and trivia. That is why we ask -- why we demand.... * bullet2, I'd cut to: editorial boards prepare editorials on restoring the rule of law and in par7: ....This is the change they and all of us should be talking about: we, the people, taking back our election, and making it about preserving freedom[snip], [snip] respect for individual human dignity, the rule of law and the system of self-government.... Hope these suggestions are helpful... |
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| Anonymous | Input welcome | 1 | Sep 17 2008, 10:17 AM EDT by thomasn528 | ||
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Thread started: Sep 17 2008, 10:15 AM EDT
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Welcome to the op-ed page for Constitution Day!
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